H. Expos Composition P.1

Continue to research details for your essay.  If you need to speak with family members, view pictures or programs in order to add specific details please do so. Re-read your essay, and try a new beginning to grad the readers attention. Use specific names and proper names for objects so that the reader can imagine what is happening.  Revise for specificity; revise for evidence. Then, re-read the actual prompt,and continue writing.