1. If you can, please report to room 114 tomorrow during brunch. Otherwise please do the following:
a. Re-read your essay OUT-LOUD with a Pencil. Mark where areas that you hear are problematic. Perhaps you repeat the same word, or use too many "coulds" or "woulds" before the actual verb. b. eliminate using the same word by combining some sentences.
c. Look at your paragraphs: do you use to few paragraphs? d. Does your essay appear finished?
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